I don’t know what we’re yelling about.
In round four of the Snowflake outlining method, I’m to expand every sentence of my one-paragraph (make that two paragraph) novel summary into a paragraph of its own. By my count that was 10 separate paragraphs. In part 1 of this round, I wrote six paragraphs, which means I’ve only got four more to go this time. Let’s get at it!

Here’s the second paragraph in my original one two-paragraph summary:
7) After toiling away in her new role for some time, Len is approached by an Eldar Thing, an empty wurm that burrows through the stars. 8) It tells her of another place she might find her lost husband, indeed *everyone* that has been lost to the winnowing dark. 9) If she were to travel to that evil place, perhaps she could free them all from oblivion… 10) In the end, Len must choose: will she traverse the Abyss to save her husband or will she seal away its evil power forever?
Now let’s work on expanding that out, shall we?
7) After toiling away in her new role for some time, Len is approached by an Eldar Thing, an empty wurm that burrows through the stars. This wurm calls itself Sloeurth and claims to exist beyond Time and Space, beyond the Waybetween and the Void, beyond our understanding of existence itself. Should the Void swallow up the entire universe, Sloeurth would be unaffected, and could move into and through the new universe or back into the vacuous nothing left in its wake as free as a butterfly on the breeze. It has seen countless universes come and go in this way, or so it says.
8) It tells her of another place she might find her lost husband, indeed everyone that has been lost to the winnowing dark. Every soul lost to the Void, every world or Shard it has devoured is deposited – where else, but the belly of the beast? – in the Abyss. She could cross through the Void with Sloeurth’s aid and use her powers as a Dreamcatcher to “tether” the Abyss with the Spider’s web, and if she did…
9) If she were to travel to that evil place, perhaps she could free them all from oblivion… But of course there’s a catch. You don’t go diving into the slavering maw of the beast expecting not to be bitten. The nightmares harassing Slumberland and the other Shard Worlds in the Waybetween are coming from somewhere, obviously. And what of Nemo’s Nightmare King he’s so keen to take vengeance on? Len doesn’t trust this wurm, and why should she?
10) In the end, Len must choose: will she traverse the Abyss to save her husband or will she seal away its evil power forever? On the one hand, it sounds so easy, get in, get out — get everyone out. Save her husband and the entire universe. But it can’t really be that easy, right? There’s gotta be monsters to battle, impossible dangers to navigate, and, like, a final boss. Right? Even with Elayne’s help, what if it’s too much for Len? What if she doesn’t just fail, what if she exposes the Waybetween to ever-increasing horrors and despair somehow worse than the breaking of an entire universe’s heart?
Okay, I guess that’s… it? So, sure, that last paragraph is a little fourth wall breaky, and doesn’t offer a ton of new information about the novel. I don’t want to spoil everything right away, but I didn’t want to redact a bunch of this section, so that’s what I went with. Now that step four of the Snowflake Method is out of the way, let’s see what’s up next in step five.
” Step 5) Take a day or two and write up a one-page description of each major character and a half-page description of the other important characters. These “character synopses” should tell the story from the point of view of each character.”
Ah, interesting. So, now I get to write some more backstory-ish stuff to expand on the bios I wrote for Len, Zieg, Nemo, and Elayne. This will almost certainly have to be private or at least heavily [REDACTED] if I post it to wordpress. We’ll see. I’ll handwrite them first and I’ll see you when I’m done. Thanks for reading!











